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Starting off my new deviantart with my first LP ever. This piece represents a new beginning for me. I'm starting to take art more seriously. One main part of this is starting to make LPs to get used to real design. I like this piece alot.

"As you grow old, the pressing issues of life constantly keep you going. You have no time to just be. Think back to when you were younger. When everything excited you and held beauty. Relax and let your head drift among the clouds..."
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stockvault.net
and various other stock sites

:+fav: Much appreciated!

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:iconfrozenfuryblade:
Great concept. Love it :]

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Explosively Sexy
:iconcorez:
Lighting needs work and maybe try adding some shadows, to give a better depth. The girl stock is kinda LQ. But I like the idea behind this, keep on practicing man, you'll get the hang of all this soon. :]
:iconek0s:
Alright. Thanks. More comments. Be harsh I need to get better.
:iconcixxy:
it's awesome considering its ur 1st lp
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-do more with her :::be more creative, try new things such as gettin rid of her shoes and placing rockets or fires instead; add air coming out of her mouth etc you get the idea.
- i like the topaz cleaness
- maybe connect elemtns with a line going thru all the balloons and plane.
-add motion effects.. she is in mid-air but you have no motion effects , therefore showing no movement.
keep at it yo.

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:iconek0s:
THanks and no topaz was used in the making of this piece :P
:iconratchet-5510:
It's very nice and it looks very well done, but the colours have no strenght. No Ooomf!

Work with Curves and Saturation. :)

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An eye for eye only ends up making the whole world blind.

M.K. Gandhi

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:iconek0s:
Thanks. I thihnk I'm gonna take the critique and the advice of my mentor and update this soon. Stay tuned!
:iconratchet-5510:
Who's your mentor?

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An eye for eye only ends up making the whole world blind.

M.K. Gandhi

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:iconek0s:
This sexy child.

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